In your words, you were like
Am tired
tired of lies
tired of pretences
tired of selfishness
and all relationship NO No's
I want sommin else!
sommin Inpiring..
like your hug
sommin spontaneous
like your sweetness
I swear i wanna get with you
.....can't believe am revealing my soul to you on sms!
I'd l love to see you
pls don't say the word NO.....
In my words I'd have said:
you took me by surprise
in my mind's eye
i see
i see opportunities
chances,
i see possiblities
where two hearts,minds,bodies, and souls can....
interlock,interweave,intertwine, to become...
a lone existence but.....
Inhibitions,restrictions,convictions and emotions
are building bridges
bridges we might never cross alone to meet each other
bridges we might not cross together
to be under one cover
to weather whatever
And speak of each other as....my Lover
where our cultural variations
would not have mattered.
But.... I smell rat in your voice
I see pretense in your moves
I feel deceit vibrating from your heart
My intuitions can't be wrong...
The discerning from my Spirit can't be doubted
Even the fluctuations from your eyeballs betray...You
Verity denies you...
Your emotions are...
are Phoney..
wu-nmmie
May '07
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
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simply amazing; well thot and presented..... sure wish i could write like u.
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